For critique
For critique
Laying by a pond taking bird photos, I took this with the other camera. Critiques welcome. Trying a little soft focus on the busy shot.
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It is a nice shot, too busy for me, but i like the reflections.
G.
G.
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Niet slecht
But to busy indeed, may get out the mower first.
Bit more softness when its this crowded.
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But to busy indeed, may get out the mower first.
Bit more softness when its this crowded.
Ed - Haarlem - the Netherlands
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Thank you both for your comments. It is in a somewhat remote area that will not be mowed as quail nest there. Maybe I will re edit it with a soft focus look. Or first use another method for resizing as that does make it look busier than the original.
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Yes, as others have said: too busy. Soft focus will help if you identify a subject. Maybe the fallen tree, the reflection, or the warm grass.
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Does this look less busy? I simplified it and then added some brush strokes and subtle texture.